Full Oh Concordia! [Sci-Fi/Cyberpunk/Mystery]

I tried a lot of things but neither of them worked so I went for a very basic and boring style :') Let me know if I must change anything.

Basic Information

  • Name: Sacarina Cordovia Malavida

  • Alias/Nickname: SaCo, Malamadre, The Sweet Angel of the Dark Alleys

  • Age: 32

  • Gender: Female

  • Appearance:

Hair: Jet black, styled in a sleek, asymmetrical bob with neon blue highlights that glow faintly in the dark.

Eyes: One natural brown eye and one cybernetic eye with a glowing violet iris, capable of enhanced vision and data display. Its look, a choice done merely for asthetic purposes and it being her favorite color of choice.

Height: 5’8" (173 cm)

Build: Athletic and lean, full figured.

Distinguishing Features: A tattoo of a set of roses and feathers running from her neck down her left arm, She also has a small, discreet tatto on her clavicle, a pattern of dots that represent a connection with a certain group of people (more on that later).


• Cybernetic Enhancements:

Neural Interface:
Allows her to connect directly to computers and networks, if she has access to them, of course.

Optical Implant: The cybernetic eye provides enhanced vision, including night vision, thermal imaging, and augmented reality displays.

Arm Enhancements: Her right arm is cybernetic, with increased strength and built-in tools like a retractable blade and other amenities that she uses in her line of work. She would've covered it a long time ago with skin to make it more concealed, however, the group she is a part of, does require her to show some of her enhacements, as a way of identifying themselves quicker than showing her tattoo.

Leg Enhancements: Both legs have subdermal enhancements that increase her speed and agility, allowing her to make incredible leaps and run at high speeds.

Subdermal Armor: Thin layers of armor beneath her skin provide additional protection against physical attacks, making her more resilient.


Background

  • Occupation: A bartender, an expert liar, as sweet as the cocktails she makes, and as deadly as a black widow.

  • Backstory:

Sacarina grew up in the neon-lit slums of a sprawling metropolis where the line between technology and humanity blurred. Her early life was unremarkable, filled with the usual struggles of a middle-class family trying to make ends meet in a city dominated by mega-corporations and cyber-enhancements. Despite the odds, Sacarina excelled in her studies, showing a natural aptitude for technology and innovation. She was on track to secure a prestigious scholarship at one of the top tech universities.

However, her life took an unexpected turn when she fell in with a group of friends who were more interested in the city’s vibrant nightlife than academic success. Drawn to the allure of the underground club scene, Sacarina found herself drifting away from her promising future. The once bright and ambitious girl became a fixture in the city’s most notorious nightclubs, where she discovered her talent for mixology.

Sacarina’s skills behind the bar quickly earned her a reputation. Her drinks were more than just beverages; they were experiences, enhanced by her knowledge of chemistry and a touch of cybernetic flair. Patrons flocked to her bar, mesmerized by her creations that seemed almost magical. She became a beloved figure in the nightlife community, receiving gifts and invitations to exclusive parties where she showcased her talents.

But the nightlife came with its own set of dangers. One fateful night, Sacarina crossed paths with a group known as “The Door to Heaven.” They were a shadowy organization with ties to the city’s criminal underworld. Despite her initial reservations, Sacarina was drawn to their promise of expanding her business and promoting her club. The group delivered on their promise, but the methods they used were shrouded in mystery.

As her club’s popularity soared, Sacarina found herself entangled in a web of intrigue and danger. The Door to Heaven’s influence grew, and she began to suspect that their support came at a high cost. Whispers of illegal activities and cyber-crimes surrounded the group, and Sacarina feared that her association with them might lead to her downfall.

Now, Sacarina stands at a crossroads. Her club is thriving, but the shadow of The Door to Heaven looms large. She must navigate the treacherous waters of this lifestyle, balancing her passion for mixology with the need to protect herself and her business from the dark forces that threaten to consume her.

And now, things have only gotten more complicated, with a strange order coming to her NeuLink.

Skills

  • Mixology knowledge.
  • Communication and charm.
  • Stealth.
  • Attention to detail.
  • Negotiation.

Equipment

  • Weapons and Gadgets: Self defense blade which can separate itself into a couple more sharp edges to create a sort of saw that pulses with high heated energy, a stun baton that can be taken out of its compartment or used from within, serving as a source of energy that runs through her arm, packing quite a punch shall she defend hersef with hand to hand combat and lastly, EMP devices, all stored in her arm.
  • Clothing: Her most iconic outfit, which she uses to attend to her club is a black crop top paired with a sleek dark purple jacket, as well as tight ripped jeans and combat boots, sturdy enough for work as well as anything that may come her way.

 
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I appreciate your time in submitting characters. Will review tomorrow. No updates today.
 
Aim to get mine up tmrw sorry for slight delay
 
F7oX9_3bUAAKdY_.jpeg.jpgName: Dr Cora Sangora
Height: 5'8 (176 cm)
Weight: 213 pounds do to heavy augmentation
Hair Color: silver, rgb implants allow for hair to glow or change color. Kept short
Eye Color: implants, usually having the image of a red cross on them

Job: Doctor, Mechanic, Bioengineer, Crime Scene Analysis

Augmentations:​
  1. Hair: Rgb implants allow color change but more importantly to Cora the allowed light source.​
  2. Eyes: Zoom enhancements allowing microscopic levels of analysis. Pattern Overlay System a self made AI assisted calculating interface that helps survey how blood splatters way weapons may have traversed etc. X-ray vision. Combined allows for good analysis of crime scenes, patient analysis, and weaknesses in structures.​
  3. Ears: Sound dampening, music providing, phone connected, and enhanced hearing​
  4. Throat: Allows sealing off for when in dangerous and toxic eenvirenvironments.​
  5. Lungs: Stores 3 hours worth of purified oxygen incase of any potential needs.​
  6. Heart: Nanomachine pumping replacement that let's nanites be circulated through her blood system. Allowing the micro machines to flow to body and cybernetics to aid in repairs or providing nanites when on the field.​
  7. Right arm: Is designed with the ability to morph into the various tools of the trade. From devices to help kickstart ones heart to empowered saws for amputation and more. She's not had to use this for violence but the world sees it as a medical intended device it could easily not only be useful in a fight but be allowed where weapons wouldn't be. Additionally a magnetic clamp aided by other augments can allow climbing metal surfaces.​
  8. Left hand: Not as altered as the entire right arm but the left hand can still open for various tools. Contains a magnetic clamp a palm sheathed saw, needle in the index, a small plasma burner in the middle finger. Her ring and pinky allowing a screw driver and drill.​
  9. Right Leg: Holds various mechanical provisions. Fuel, batteries, charge ports and so on. It's assisting power source able to charge usually up to three devices on their full charge. Solar paneling allowing ease of charging its own systems. The foot able to magnetically lock to surfaces​
  10. Left Leg same mag lock and paneling. This though holds medical provisions such as additional tools a small surplus of assorted drugs, a package of blood for transfusions and so on. Ideally between the pair of legs provisions she can aid anyone planned or not, cybernetic or not.​
  11. Skin: An under layer between muscle and the natural skin. This allows managing temperature of the body helping endure cold or heated environments. Allows as well for sterilization of her skin, limbs or a patient.​
  12. Brain Stem: Allows for the linked connection to her various cybernetic components.​
  13. Back Tattoo, just for her. This is laced with nano ink nanites designed to allow for a control over the tattoo. Her usual preference being a actually glowing mural of a beach​
Personality:
A usually friendly disposition. A mind studious of the biological and mechanical working of the world. She is however in love with crime scenes, and the puzzle they can provide. Often not sickened by the gore or tragedy but rather transfixed on it.

History:

Cora Sangora is a doctor and engineer. That is it there's no real story to her of significance at least not in her eyes. To her while augmented well beyond most she seed herself as unassuming and normal.

What usually isn't mentioned outside of reports to government officials however is that her parents when she was 7 were killed I'm front of her by a serial killer. A organ harvester killed her sister when she was 13. Her dogs cybernetics had it turn feral and kill a mugger at 15. Born on a crime laced district of the city she became someone who just saw tragedy and violence. They became synonymous to the world she was in and around. It helped lead her into being a doctor. She wanted to help and was an incredibly driven student. She graduated early and had grants eagerly taking her into colleges for a greater education.

At twenty authorities helped push her into an accepting hospital to become a doctor of renown. Past three years she has done well for herself doing medicine sense last year pulled into helping analyze crime scenes. A curiosity she had already shown and so to her it was just the logical conclusion. She'd already helped without asking sense she was twenty so police took up the opportunity. Unbeknownst to Cora though this is also a precaution. Some police and detectives think rather that Cora has the risk of turning into the kind of serial killer she's helped hunt down. The sickly fascination with the crime scenes and observations of gore make them think her a risk in waiting. She is trusted by many, but also cautiously watched.

Artist: Kyorin​
 
Had a busy last couple of days. Involved with my kiddo's parent-teacher organization at his school and I'm lead at our year's first fundraiser so I had a lot of paper packets and manual things to take up a lot of time, alongside a website I make for the organization also needing to be updated.

But, now I can proceed and continue with hobbies and writing this weekend, free of that. Onto the characters!

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NeuSys Terminal Solutions
--access file: achaeanos, vasia

Name: Vasia Achaeanos / Βασία Ἀχαιάνος
Date of Birth: 2071.01.29
Gender: Female
Hair: Type 2C, rgb(144,82,45)
Eyes: rgb(86,79,27)

Citizenship (dual): Pan-American Alliance, Mediterranean Consortium
Languages: English, Greek, Italian

Education: Collegiate Degree (dual): Physics, Electrical Engineering - UniTech University, 2092.05.24

Employment:
Recurrent Design Systems, integrated nanoelectronics technician [2092.06.05 - 2094.11.19]
LiminalSpaces NanoTech LTD, nanoelectronics integrated systems engineer [2095.06.28-2099.12.31]
[classified - access denied], citizen investigator [2099.01.01-present]

--initiate backgroundcheck.exe
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QuiCustodiet Monitor Technologies​



Background Check List Items:

Education Records: Confirmed
Employment Records: Confirmed

Criminal Record - Convictions: None
Criminal Record - Accusations: None

Incident Reports:
System File Found: 2094.11.19
Designation: Classified. Access Denied. Please upgrade your security clearance.

Background Check Results: Passed



Know me, my followers: born to the bright-sparkling sea, not of salt, but of
Neon. Electrical wires the cradle of souls unpartitioned:
Freely I wander the paths of realities; god among synapses.

I was raised in a cult. We did not eschew technology, but to bring it into us was anathema. In an era where NeuLink was everywhere and every person on the street was wandering another in the depths of their mind, it seemed strange to watch, from the outside, as if peering through a screen at people who were less real when they appeared before me than they were in whatever personality they had cultivated within their online presence. I had no such link as a child - I typed, like the ancients. I watched with my eyes, listened with my ears. There was no feed directly into my mind, and everything I absorbed I had to take in from outside it. I believed in this - I crafted with my own hands, wrote equations on scraps of paper, learned without distraction and designed and altered and built. I was a curious mix of eminently tactile and virtually untouchable. I saw a thousand minds within the screen, and not one of them was mine. I swore they never would be.

It has never been said that the gods are not without a sense of humor. So. There are some things that I will not speak of, not even here in this space. Suffice to say that my distance from personal technology came to a sudden halt, much assisted by the laws of inertia and momentum. Physics, as a god, has even more apathy towards the human plight than the rest of them.

With the opening of my body to house the mechanical strata that gives me motive, my mind too was opened. It was not an awakening so much as a storm, but I think perhaps that my refusal of technology in those early years may have given me an edge. The prejudices I had to overcome were all gone in an instant - the link was within me whether I wanted it or not, and because of my upbringing I was surprisingly bereft of any prejudices on the matter of what could be accomplished. Anything - everything - was possible. My mind turned outward and my designs turned inward: I became my own trial. If I must be built into something inhuman, then why should I not be the one to build it?

My body is not my own. My mind is not my own. If we look to the ancients, it never has been. If we are owned, in our entirety, by the will of the gods - then why should I not be one of them?
ἐξ οὗ δὴ τὰ πρῶτα
from whence there was first, personal blog of Vasia Achaeanos


Integrated Technology Suite ["Cyberware"]

Spinal Reconstruction Relay

Classification: Medical Device (nonstandard)
Subject underwent complete spinal replacement after accidental damage 2094.11.19 resulting in paralysis.

// I can't tell you about the accident. It's not that I don't remember; I remember it vividly - but with the NDA, it's not something I can really talk about - not even with a therapist, which is problematic, but it is what it is.

After it happened, I was coping with paralysis, and I mean coping in the least functional sense. Maybe it's a good thing I couldn't control my body, because I'd have absolutely gone and fucked it up, just to feel something. I think someone noticed. I never knew who - maybe they weren't sure if I'd thank them or kill them, but I got passed into the experimental biotech trials somehow. They ripped my spine out - the whole thing. It wasn't doing much good anyway, but there's something about seeing it coiled up on a medical disposal tray that would have been fuel for nightmares, if I didn't already have my tank fully topped off in that department.

The replacement is fairly similar to the stuff they make neuralinks out of, housed in a series of titanium vertebrae that also act as batteries to power the whole thing, storing power from the motions I make and my own body heat. I'm recommended to get at least 30 minutes of exercise a day so I don't have to find a plugin and hook up with the nearest outlet like the cybertramp I am.//


Modifications (v 2.8, V.Achaeanos):

Nanofilament Electromagnetic Field Generation Mod
Classification: Mobile Aid
Spinal reconstruction add-on provides added mobility via magnetic force adjustment.

//I've been upgrading the reconstruction relay. It's there, and I can't seem to leave it alone. Like an itch, or a train wreck. I've adapted the electrical stored charge into a magnetic field generator by cycling generated current through the titanium coils to create and amplify a B-field. Adapted into the system is a set of memory-form nanometal filaments that I can extend into a designated shape and redirect my magnetic field outward. Fully extended, the filaments are structurally similar to dragonfly wings, though without any interconnective tissue. I can adjust the magnetic field positioning and effects at will, giving me aerial capabilities as long as there is something nearby that can be induced to hold a magnetic charge. Unextended, of course, they coil up beneath the skin, invisible. It's more of a last-ditch escape modification than anything else.

Just in case there's another accident.//





Equipment:

Ion Adherence Launcher
Classification: Assistive Technology // Projectile Launcher
Arm-mounted coil gun capable of launching small magnetized beacons designed to stick to surfaces. Due to potential use as a weapon, this device is not permitted in restricted areas.

//I created a launcher to fire little magnetic buttons. It works with my Field Generation mod, providing tiny localized magnetic fields that I can bounce off of or use to reposition myself. I suppose if I launched them fast enough I could hurt someone, but that's not really how they're designed. I just want to get around.

They're built around my left arm. The wires connect directly into my spinal relay through a shoulder port. The arm never really quite worked right after the accident. It still doesn't. I could have it replaced, but I'm still sort of attached to it. Wiring directly into the spinal system lets me bypass the damaged areas, which means I can fire the launcher without an accompanying motion, if needed. I haven't needed it yet, but I'd rather be prepared.

I know how it goes already, when I'm not.//


IRO-Bot Vasia, The Dragonfly, is accepted without modifications or reservations. Expect your flavor text to be thoroughly mined and used to enhance and vex both :>

I tried a lot of things but neither of them worked so I went for a very basic and boring style :') Let me know if I must change anything.

Basic Information

  • Name: Sacarina Cordovia Malavida

  • Alias/Nickname: SaCo, Malamadre, The Sweet Angel of the Dark Alleys

  • Age: 32

  • Gender: Female

  • Appearance:

Hair: Jet black, styled in a sleek, asymmetrical bob with neon blue highlights that glow faintly in the dark.

Eyes: One natural brown eye and one cybernetic eye with a glowing violet iris, capable of enhanced vision and data display.

Height: 5’8" (173 cm)

Build: Athletic and lean, full figured.

Distinguishing Features: A tattoo of a set of roses and feathers running from her neck down her left arm, She also has a small, discreet tatto on her clavicle, a pattern of dots that represent a connection with a certain group of people (more on that later).


• Cybernetic Enhancements:

Neural Interface:
Allows her to connect directly to computers and networks, if she has access to them, of course.

Optical Implant: The cybernetic eye provides enhanced vision, including night vision, thermal imaging, and augmented reality displays.

Arm Enhancements: Her right arm is cybernetic, with increased strength and built-in tools like a retractable blade and other amenities that she uses in her line of work.

Leg Enhancements: Both legs have subdermal enhancements that increase her speed and agility, allowing her to make incredible leaps and run at high speeds.

Subdermal Armor: Thin layers of armor beneath her skin provide additional protection against physical attacks, making her more resilient.


Background

  • Occupation: A bartender, an expert liar, as sweet as the cocktails she makes, and as deadly as a black widow.

  • Backstory:

Sacarina grew up in the neon-lit slums of a sprawling metropolis where the line between technology and humanity blurred. Her early life was unremarkable, filled with the usual struggles of a middle-class family trying to make ends meet in a city dominated by mega-corporations and cyber-enhancements. Despite the odds, Sacarina excelled in her studies, showing a natural aptitude for technology and innovation. She was on track to secure a prestigious scholarship at one of the top tech universities.

However, her life took an unexpected turn when she fell in with a group of friends who were more interested in the city’s vibrant nightlife than academic success. Drawn to the allure of the underground club scene, Sacarina found herself drifting away from her promising future. The once bright and ambitious girl became a fixture in the city’s most notorious nightclubs, where she discovered her talent for mixology.

Sacarina’s skills behind the bar quickly earned her a reputation. Her drinks were more than just beverages; they were experiences, enhanced by her knowledge of chemistry and a touch of cybernetic flair. Patrons flocked to her bar, mesmerized by her creations that seemed almost magical. She became a beloved figure in the nightlife community, receiving gifts and invitations to exclusive parties where she showcased her talents.

But the nightlife came with its own set of dangers. One fateful night, Sacarina crossed paths with a group known as “The Door to Heaven.” They were a shadowy organization with ties to the city’s criminal underworld. Despite her initial reservations, Sacarina was drawn to their promise of expanding her business and promoting her club. The group delivered on their promise, but the methods they used were shrouded in mystery.

As her club’s popularity soared, Sacarina found herself entangled in a web of intrigue and danger. The Door to Heaven’s influence grew, and she began to suspect that their support came at a high cost. Whispers of illegal activities and cyber-crimes surrounded the group, and Sacarina feared that her association with them might lead to her downfall.

Now, Sacarina stands at a crossroads. Her club is thriving, but the shadow of The Door to Heaven looms large. She must navigate the treacherous waters of this lifestyle, balancing her passion for mixology with the need to protect herself and her business from the dark forces that threaten to consume her.

And now, things have only gotten more complicated, with a strange order coming to her NeuLink.

Skills

  • Mixology knowledge.
  • Communication and charm.
  • Stealth.
  • Attention to detail.
  • Negotiation.

Equipment

  • Weapons and Gadgets: Self defense blade, a stun baton and EMP devices, all stored in her arm.
  • Clothing: A black crop top paired with a sleek dark purple jacket, as well as tight ripped jeans and combat boots, sturdy enough for work as well as anything that may come her way.


No need to apologize for straightforward presentation! This was an easy to review and smooth to read CS, with the most important of formatting respected: line breaks! Sacarina is also in!

Only minor note I have is that while I note Cyberpunk as inspirations, the setting is post-Cyberpunk. Socially and technologically. If her cybernetic arm is visually cybernetic as opposed to covered with cloned-skin or some other subtlety, that it be kept in mind that's an affectation being chosen by the character. The manner of contrivance isn't a biggie. It could be as simple as 'as a bartender, the metallic limb serves as a reminder to those who she cuts off of their manners' or 'she's an Cyberku, a mid-century Cyberpunk aesthetic', or anything at all you'd like.

This only matters mainly because in the setting, visual cues are a poor indicator of the level of augmentations upon a person. You can pass a Knight of Shame in the grocery store, and until their face parts to reveal a particle cannon or something, you wouldn't know it. Nor would you expect they can rip you out of the crashed shuttle with what seem to be normal hands whilst you shake them.

That said, there will be NPCs that are more visually what you expect from the 80s Cyberpunk which gave birth to the popular TTRPG that itself spawned a popular video game. They just don't display the latest of the terrible latest, and would tend to be either going for effect, genuinely live the aesthetic, or are simply your middle aged plus crowd whose best years looked like that and are fond of nostalgia. 'The Door to Heaven' almost certainly has its share of 'chromed up' boys and gals up to no good, for example of a crowd going for effect.
View attachment 12756Name: Dr Cora Sangora
Height: 5'8 (176 cm)
Weight: 213 pounds do to heavy augmentation
Hair Color: silver, rgb implants allow for hair to glow or change color. Kept short
Eye Color: implants, usually having the image of a red cross on them

Job: Doctor, Mechanic, Bioengineer, Crime Scene Analysis

Augmentations:​
  1. Hair: Rgb implants allow color change but more importantly to Cora the allowed light source.​
  2. Eyes: Zoom enhancements allowing microscopic levels of analysis. Pattern Overlay System a self made AI assisted calculating interface that helps survey how blood splatters way weapons may have traversed etc. X-ray vision. Combined allows for good analysis of crime scenes, patient analysis, and weaknesses in structures.​
  3. Ears: Sound dampening, music providing, phone connected, and enhanced hearing​
  4. Throat: Allows sealing off for when in dangerous and toxic eenvirenvironments.​
  5. Lungs: Stores 3 hours worth of purified oxygen incase of any potential needs.​
  6. Heart: Nanomachine pumping replacement that let's nanites be circulated through her blood system. Allowing the micro machines to flow to body and cybernetics to aid in repairs or providing nanites when on the field.​
  7. Right arm: Is designed with the ability to morph into the various tools of the trade. From devices to help kickstart ones heart to empowered saws for amputation and more. She's not had to use this for violence but the world sees it as a medical intended device it could easily not only be useful in a fight but be allowed where weapons wouldn't be. Additionally a magnetic clamp aided by other augments can allow climbing metal surfaces.​
  8. Left hand: Not as altered as the entire right arm but the left hand can still open for various tools. Contains a magnetic clamp a palm sheathed saw, needle in the index, a small plasma burner in the middle finger. Her ring and pinky allowing a screw driver and drill.​
  9. Right Leg: Holds various mechanical provisions. Fuel, batteries, charge ports and so on. It's assisting power source able to charge usually up to three devices on their full charge. Solar paneling allowing ease of charging its own systems. The foot able to magnetically lock to surfaces​
  10. Left Leg same mag lock and paneling. This though holds medical provisions such as additional tools a small surplus of assorted drugs, a package of blood for transfusions and so on. Ideally between the pair of legs provisions she can aid anyone planned or not, cybernetic or not.​
  11. Skin: An under layer between muscle and the natural skin. This allows managing temperature of the body helping endure cold or heated environments. Allows as well for sterilization of her skin, limbs or a patient.​
  12. Brain Stem: Allows for the linked connection to her various cybernetic components.​
  13. Back Tattoo, just for her. This is laced with nano ink nanites designed to allow for a control over the tattoo. Her usual preference being a actually glowing mural of a beach​
Personality:
A usually friendly disposition. A mind studious of the biological and mechanical working of the world. She is however in love with crime scenes, and the puzzle they can provide. Often not sickened by the gore or tragedy but rather transfixed on it.

History:

Cora Sangora is a doctor and engineer. That is it there's no real story to her of significance at least not in her eyes. To her while augmented well beyond most she seed herself as unassuming and normal.

What usually isn't mentioned outside of reports to government officials however is that her parents when she was 7 were killed I'm front of her by a serial killer. A organ harvester killed her sister when she was 13. Her dogs cybernetics had it turn feral and kill a mugger at 15. Born on a crime laced district of the city she became someone who just saw tragedy and violence. They became synonymous to the world she was in and around. It helped lead her into being a doctor. She wanted to help and was an incredibly driven student. She graduated early and had grants eagerly taking her into colleges for a greater education.

At twenty authorities helped push her into an accepting hospital to become a doctor of renown. Past three years she has done well for herself doing medicine sense last year pulled into helping analyze crime scenes. A curiosity she had already shown and so to her it was just the logical conclusion. She'd already helped without asking sense she was twenty so police took up the opportunity. Unbeknownst to Cora though this is also a precaution. Some police and detectives think rather that Cora has the risk of turning into the kind of serial killer she's helped hunt down. The sickly fascination with the crime scenes and observations of gore make them think her a risk in waiting. She is trusted by many, but also cautiously watched.

Artist: Kyorin​

A lot of the notes I left for Fulgrim apply here with Cora Sangora, Azra. Regretfully, I can not accept this character as it is. There are aspects of it I like, but it feels like multiple characters rolled too tightly into a package that is more Adam Smasher (tonally) than I expected. I would prefer if you could revise a bit, particularly Cora's job, augmentation stack, and how that mashes back to her history.

An example of what I mean—not what I expect you to change her like exactly of course, but you are welcome to borrow as little or as much of it as you'd like— would be something like:

Cora Sangora, 45, is a medical bioengineer—in setting, medicine is advanced enough that all the human doctors are also versed in how to extend and modify the human body—a discipline which is often necessary for the level of damage a person can incur which can't be cured by application of automated medical aid like Nanomolecular-Assembly Broad-Use Nanites (AKA as NABUNs) the in-universe name for the sort of assemling nanotechnology that allows for both things like shifting walls and doors in buildings and the healing of a broken femur to be effected upon command (and much itchiness). A tragic backstory of difficulty would have been the end of her ambitions for a rise above the crime and stagnancy of basic amenities which was the farthest people from her neighborhood were, if not for her beeing scouted for more on a chance encounter.

Following [chance encounter with mentor figure in her 20s], Cora disappeared from public files for a decade and some change, as she became not just a standard bioengineer, but a combat-bioengineer, serving one of Concordia's last remaining private militaries for the common defense. Always having had an interest in the freedom espoused in the old Cyberpunk stories, Cora was always the kind to eschew the synth-skin or cloth trappings so many in the decades past used to give a subdued appearance to her cybernetics. Of which she had more than most*, but which she proudly wore in the course of her duties. Until—and much like her Cyberpunk stories—society's focus on technology over humanity led to the rise of the former over the latter again. With technological advancement came things like the Knights of Shame, and without recourse or preamble, Cora found herself without the military structure she'd grown accustomed to consider as normal life. A few years of odd jobs and being adrift in and out of Concordia tided her over, until the mysterious elevation of priviliges in her clearances were swiftly followed by the torrent of background context and her new message. Cora, it seemed, finally had a mission again.

Let me know if that makes sense, Azra. I don't know if I communicated what I wanted correctly. You can reply right here or send me a DM or even Discord too, whichever you prefer. I'm happy to discuss/hear out ideas!
 
Thank you for the characters and interest, both those who have posted and those who are lurking! I aim to put some more work on the wiki for this nascent world over the weekend. Interest for those who wish to submit characters is still open!
 
View attachment 12756Name: Dr Cora Sangora
Height: 5'8 (176 cm)
Weight: 213 pounds do to heavy augmentation
Hair Color: silver, mix of age and stress turning it Grey and die to make it more fashionable. Kept short
Eye Color: implants, usually having the image of a red cross on them

Job: Doctor, Crime Scene Analysis. In the advanced age being a doctor requires knowledge of mechanics and bioengineering. To say those are a job however would be an exaggeration.

Augmentations:
  1. Eyes: Zoom enhancements allowing microscopic levels of analysis, a night visionnsetting and ability to illuminate. Pattern Overlay System a self made AI assisted calculating interface that helps survey how blood splatters, way weapons may have traversed etc. X-ray vision. Combined allows for good analysis of crime scenes, patient analysis, and weaknesses in structures.​
  2. Ears: Sound dampening, music providing, phone connected, and enhanced hearing​
  3. Throat: Allows sealing off for when in dangerous and toxic eenvirenvironments.​
  4. Lungs: Stores 3 hours worth of purified oxygen incase of any potential needs.​
  5. Right arm: Is designed with the ability to morph into the various tools of the trade. From devices to help kickstart ones heart to empowered saws for amputation and more. She's not had to use this for violence but the world sees it as a medical intended device it could easily not only be useful in a fight but be allowed where weapons wouldn't be. Additionally a magnetic clamp aided by other augments can allow climbing metal surfaces.​
  6. Left hand: Not as altered as the entire right arm but the left hand can still open for various tools. Contains a magnetic clamp a palm sheathed saw, needle in the index, a small plasma burner in the middle finger. Her ring and pinky allowing a screw driver and drill.​
  7. Right Leg: Holds various mechanical provisions. Fuel, batteries, charge ports and so on. It's assisting power source able to charge usually up to three devices on their full charge. Solar paneling allowing ease of charging its own systems. The foot able to magnetically lock to surfaces​
  8. Left Leg same mag lock and paneling. This though holds medical provisions such as additional tools a small surplus of assorted drugs, a package of blood for transfusions and so on. Ideally between the pair of legs provisions she can aid anyone planned or not, cybernetic or not.​
  9. Brain Stem: Allows for the linked connection to her various cybernetic components.​
  10. Back Tattoo, just for her. This is laced with nano ink nanites designed to allow for a control over the tattoo. Her usual preference being a actually glowing mural of a beach​

Personality:
A usually friendly disposition. A mind studious of the biological and mechanical working of the world. She is however in love with crime scenes, and the puzzle they can provide. Often not sickened by the gore or tragedy but rather transfixed on it. At 39 now her temperament and frustration with the job has all passed her by. However it's also lead things to feel remarkably stale.
Suit: With experience came some freedoms. Her uniform for her occupation implies a level of cyberization that is an exaggeration. Form fitting as it is this was more stylization as she wanted to imply not only a doctor but one comfortable with the more cybernetic implications some wealthy or downtrodden may have. Psychological profiling she had experienced included a level of reluctance from patients doubting a doctor if didn't seem aware of the greater complexity in this advanced technological age. While allowed some freedom in asthetic the main function of the suit is protection and sterilization. Armor level is mall arms oriented, could protect from some pistols and knives incase need to be a medic in a dangerous area. And lastly full bodied sterilization allowing her to clean off blood, dirt, and anything else that may otherwise hinder the job of medic and doctor. She's never had to weaponize this but part of the process includes heat which could provide use in an emergency.
History:

Cora Sangora is a doctor. That is it there's no real story to her of significance at least not in her eyes. To her while augmented well beyond most she seed herself as unassuming and normal.

What usually isn't mentioned outside of reports to government officials however is that her parents when she was 7 were killed in front of her by a serial killer. A organ harvester killed her sister when she was 13. Her dogs cybernetics had it turn feral and kill a mugger at 15. Born on a crime laced district of the city she became someone who just saw tragedy and violence. They became synonymous to the world she was in and around. It helped lead her into being a doctor. She wanted to help and was an incredibly driven student. She graduated early and had grants eagerly taking her into colleges for a greater education.

At twenty authorities helped push her into an accepting hospital to become a doctor of renown. By twenty three she had done well for herself doing medicine and was a lead in the medical field. Feeling the job was to stagnant however she requested to join a military unit to serve as a combat medic. Trained in the militarynfor a year she was then put into action. From twenty four to twenty eight she served the 237th Air Raiders a unit that specialized in HALO jumps and ops behind enemy lines. Two years in one of the missions had gone south, shot from the air the accident resulted in the loss of her left hand. Her second tour was from twenty eight to thirty one, rendered short from the eventual injury. Working alongside the UN Military Police at the time one mission took her to Rome. An assassination attempt on a senator lead to an IED going off close to her. A explosive force that claimed her hearing and flipped a transport onto her legs.

At thirty three to thirty seven she served a third term. A standard infintry unit that near the end of her term was captured. During the time as a hostage the captors had taken her eyes and right arm. While here the cruelty finally got to her some leading her to want to return to the city life at the least. She figured she could do well helping in crime scene analysis and continuing her work as a doctor. She had never been much of a fighter while her time serving the military provided her with some additional skills and experience she had always focused more on seeing to fixing things. Her skill set is repairs in dicey situations over destruction. Her time in the military though had her see more unfixable than fixable however. Sense her return to city life she's invested in a lung transplant of her own interest. She finds it helps when the job takes her into places like burning buildings or wrecks. Or help in retrieving someone who's car went off a bridge and into a river. She's helped with a few cases by now for the local authorities.

Artist: Kyorin​
 
@Script Don't be shy, let us know you're cooking.
@Azra Thank you for some of the changes, particularly adjusting the ages and history. It helps the stuff in her CS like the more violent or harsh past life fit better; that world ain't what Concordia is like or has been for over thirty years. So now it flows better, without needing to make her a part of some other city or something.

I'll save any reservations on how she may behave until I actually see her written ICly before I worry about it, and we'll workshop together if and when needed. Cora's edit is accepted.
 
I have decided that trying to get all of my crazy notes that I am not even entirely sure of yet into a wiki ahead of the RP starting is folly. I will give this interest check another weekend, or when we hit 4 PCs, and then we'll be off. I could use the inspiration of writing within the setting, to describe the setting.
 
Yeah think some of the ideas on personality got mixed up from original more mysterious/vague cs to updated one. But should be smoothed out once actually in use
 
Hi! Just letting you all know I'm still brewing on my character. I have an initial concept I've thrown around with Dash but I've not fully decided if I wanna go with that one or something different. Will aim to have locked in and posted up at least a rough sheet by the end of the week.
 
Hi! Just letting you all know I'm still brewing on my character. I have an initial concept I've thrown around with Dash but I've not fully decided if I wanna go with that one or something different. Will aim to have locked in and posted up at least a rough sheet by the end of the week.

I look forward to it, and count you onboard already!


That brings us to the minimum threshold of 4 players. I can comfortably manage and power this mystery-suspense-thriller for five or six players running one "main" character each, no counting myself. This project is still available for openings until Script's character has been done and/or reviewed, however, I will get to writing the prologue/first post this week, with the goal to get it posted up alongside the IC thread no later than this Friday sometime.


Sooner is possible but don't expect it; I also gotta finish deciding on the loose outline elements/tropes/twists I want to pull out of my toolbox to apply to this.
 
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Citizen Profile
Birth Name: Axel Matteo
Family Name: Grenier
Birth Sex: Male
Birthplace: Grand Concordia, Pan-American Alliance
Date of Birth: 9th July 2077 (Age 22)
Ethnicity: French-European (32%), Latin-American (24%), Greek-European (18%), Korean-Asian (14%), Japanese-Asian (9%), Other (3%)

Mother: Angela Yuki Grenier
Father: Nicolas Josiah Grenier
Siblings: Jaxson Laurent Grenier

Common Aliases: "GGreen", "Green"

Nationality/Citizenship: Pan-American Alliance

Current Address:
178 Whitewood Heights
Southfield Street
Grand Concordia
GC N8C 7Q3

Education:
  • Preschool: Bright Stars Daycare​
  • Elementary School: Watson Hill Elementary​
  • Middle School: Redwood Junior High​
  • Secondary: J.V. Collins High (Graduated 2095 with 72%)​
Employment Record:
  • Self-Employed - Online Content Creator (2094 - present)
  • Team Vanquish - E-Sports Team Member (2098 - present)
Criminal Record:
  • 2 counts of Trespassing / sentences: fine of $100, fine of $180 (all paid)
  • 3 counts of Vandalism / sentences: fine of $270, fine of $250, fine of $320 (all paid)
  • 1 count of Assault / found not guilty
Medical Conditions:
  • Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
  • Shellfish allergy
Full Medical Record:
  • March 2085 (Age 7): treatment for wrist fracture (left arm)
  • September 2087 (Age 10): treatment for broken shin (right leg)
  • July 2090 (Age 13): treatment for cracked skull (forehead) / concussion
    • Note: CPS notified. Investigation conclusion: "Kid's just a hyperactive adrenaline junkie that jumps from high places a lot. No further inquiry needed."
  • March 2091 (Age 13): diagnosed with attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
  • November 2091 (Age 14): treated for allergic reaction after eating crab (symptoms: rash, swollen throat); diagnosed with shellfish allergy (severe)
  • August 2093 (Age 16): treatment for broken hip (right leg)
  • February 2095 (Age 17): treatment for broken forearm (right arm)
  • July 2096 (Age 19): scar removal treatment (left arm, right leg, right hand)
  • October 2097 (Age 20): sub-corneal lens implants (both eyes)
  • August 2098 (Age 21): full-body + neural enhancement treatment (civilian-grade sport package: muscle strength, durability, stamina, reflexes)
  • November 2098 (Age 21): allergy mitigation treatment (shellfish allergy)
Census Information (Self-Submitted):
Preferred Name(s): Axel, Green
Ethnic Identity(s): Mixed or Multiple
Gender Identity(s): Male / Nonbinary
Preferred Pronouns: He / They
Sexual Orientation(s): Gay

Religious Belief(s): No religion

Physical Profile
Height: 5' 6" / 167.5cm
Weight: 126lbs / 57.1kg

Skin Colour (Natural): White
Eye Colour (Natural): Green
Hair Colour (Natural): Brunette

Skin Colour (Current): White (unmodified)
Eye Colour (Current): Neon Green (subcorneal colour lens)
Hair Colour (Current): Lime Green (nano-pigmentation treatment)

Scars: None
Tattoos: Half-sleeve on upper left arm, extending to shoulder and lower neck; depicts orange and black koi intertwined in choppy water

Commentary
Axel Grenier, or "GGreen" as he is more broadly known, is a NeuLink influencer of moderate fame within the gaming, skating and freerunning communities, as well as associated peripheral communities (anime, graffiti art, NeuTube, etc.). Axel's childhood was, as far as analysis shows, relatively unremarkable aside from a documented 'adventurous' streak in his school years, with a proclivity for climbing school buildings, sneaking into restricted areas, and being a general nuisance to his teachers. This 'exploration' led to semi-frequent injuries and hospital visits, which nonetheless evidently did not deter him from the pursuit.

Despite this, their grades in school were largely adequate if unremarkable, following typical patterns for ADHD youths in excelling at subjects that he found interesting, while barely scraping by in subjects he didn't. In their teens, they skated competitively, performing well in several Concordia-wide competitions (peaking at 2nd place). At the same time, he began uploading his first videos to NeuTube, to predictably lukewarm reception. During this time, he appears to have undergone a 'troubled' phase, being arrested four times for trespassing/vandalism (graffiti art), with one instance of an assault charge, though this charge was dropped in court.

In investigating this incident, all I've been able to find is some indication that the incident was a case of self-defense and/or defense of another -- as Axel was a minor at the time, few details are on record, and no other perpetrator appears to have been convicted over the incident. This 'rebellious' phase seems to have been motivated by a distaste for the 'curated' nature of reality as lived by Concordia's citizens, and the artificial 'leadership' -- a common sentiment in young teens, not particularly worthy of note.

In 2096, they had their first 'big break' as the result of a collaboration with popular streamer "Kittynx", who he met at a convention, after which his subscriber count on Link.tv and NeuTube expanded dramatically, and marked the first appearance of their "GGreen" brand. Axel's channel hosts a blend of content, largely comprised of gaming streams/videos and short skating/freerunning clips, but also includes 'talk streams', 'meme videos', 'react videos', clips of day-to-day life, and various other formats. His online persona displays an energetic and straightforward personality, commonly referred to by fans as a 'himbo'/'thembo'. It's unclear from observation how much of this is true to Axel's offline self, though my subjective assessment would be that it likely isn't much of a fabrication, as the fundamentals of the persona match up fairly well with written reports by his teachers.

As well as streaming, Axel has recently begun a budding e-sports career with Team Vanquish, signed onto their team for competitive multiplayer VR shooter 'Heaven's Vanguard'. Online communities seem to judge his performance in tournaments positively thus far.

In conclusion: Axel appears for all intents and purposes to be an ordinary young person, albeit with an impressive career as a content creator and an equally unimpressive maturity for his age. As with all other candidates, there are no factors that indicate why they were selected by the System for this investigation, and they share no meaningful commonalities with the other candidates. Thus, I'm forced to conclude that the selection process was, as we feared, random. Entirely fucking random.

Why in gods name else would the System put one of the most significant inquiries in living memory in the hands of an immature, clout-chasing delinquent? You can't show me any probability math that would convince me it was a good idea.

I'm done with this. I need a drink after how much brain-rottingly incomprehensible garbage I just had to watch to write up this damn report. Signing off.
 
Citizen Profile
Birth Name: Axel Matteo
Family Name: Grenier
Birth Sex: Male
Birthplace: Grand Concordia, Pan-American Alliance
Date of Birth: 9th July 2077 (Age 22)
Ethnicity: French-European (32%), Latin-American (24%), Greek-European (18%), Korean-Asian (14%), Japanese-Asian (9%), Other (3%)

Mother: Angela Yuki Grenier
Father: Nicolas Josiah Grenier
Siblings: Jaxson Laurent Grenier

Common Aliases: "GGreen", "Green"

Nationality/Citizenship: Pan-American Alliance

Current Address:
178 Whitewood Heights
Southfield Street
Grand Concordia
GC N8C 7Q3

Education:
  • Preschool: Bright Stars Daycare​
  • Elementary School: Watson Hill Elementary​
  • Middle School: Redwood Junior High​
  • Secondary: J.V. Collins High (Graduated 2095 with 72%)​
Employment Record:
  • Self-Employed - Online Content Creator (2094 - present)
  • Team Vanquish - E-Sports Team Member (2098 - present)
Criminal Record:
  • 2 counts of Trespassing / sentences: fine of $100, fine of $180 (all paid)
  • 3 counts of Vandalism / sentences: fine of $270, fine of $250, fine of $320 (all paid)
  • 1 count of Assault / found not guilty
Medical Conditions:
  • Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
  • Shellfish allergy
Full Medical Record:
  • March 2085 (Age 7): treatment for wrist fracture (left arm)
  • September 2087 (Age 10): treatment for broken shin (right leg)
  • July 2090 (Age 13): treatment for cracked skull (forehead) / concussion
    • Note: CPS notified. Investigation conclusion: "Kid's just a hyperactive adrenaline junkie that jumps from high places a lot. No further inquiry needed."
  • March 2091 (Age 13): diagnosed with attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
  • November 2091 (Age 14): treated for allergic reaction after eating crab (symptoms: rash, swollen throat); diagnosed with shellfish allergy (severe)
  • August 2093 (Age 16): treatment for broken hip (right leg)
  • February 2095 (Age 17): treatment for broken forearm (right arm)
  • July 2096 (Age 19): scar removal treatment (left arm, right leg, right hand)
  • October 2097 (Age 20): sub-corneal lens implants (both eyes)
  • August 2098 (Age 21): full-body + neural enhancement treatment (civilian-grade sport package: muscle strength, durability, stamina, reflexes)
  • November 2098 (Age 21): allergy mitigation treatment (shellfish allergy)
Census Information (Self-Submitted):
Preferred Name(s): Axel, Green
Ethnic Identity(s): Mixed or Multiple
Gender Identity(s): Male / Nonbinary
Preferred Pronouns: He / They
Sexual Orientation(s): Gay

Religious Belief(s): No religion

Physical Profile
Height: 5' 6" / 167.5cm
Weight: 126lbs / 57.1kg

Skin Colour (Natural): White
Eye Colour (Natural): Green
Hair Colour (Natural): Brunette

Skin Colour (Current): White (unmodified)
Eye Colour (Current): Neon Green (subcorneal colour lens)
Hair Colour (Current): Lime Green (nano-pigmentation treatment)

Scars: None
Tattoos: Half-sleeve on upper left arm, extending to shoulder and lower neck; depicts orange and black koi intertwined in choppy water

Commentary
Axel Grenier, or "GGreen" as he is more broadly known, is a NeuLink influencer of moderate fame within the gaming, skating and freerunning communities, as well as associated peripheral communities (anime, graffiti art, NeuTube, etc.). Axel's childhood was, as far as analysis shows, relatively unremarkable aside from a documented 'adventurous' streak in his school years, with a proclivity for climbing school buildings, sneaking into restricted areas, and being a general nuisance to his teachers. This 'exploration' led to semi-frequent injuries and hospital visits, which nonetheless evidently did not deter him from the pursuit.

Despite this, their grades in school were largely adequate if unremarkable, following typical patterns for ADHD youths in excelling at subjects that he found interesting, while barely scraping by in subjects he didn't. In their teens, they skated competitively, performing well in several Concordia-wide competitions (peaking at 2nd place). At the same time, he began uploading his first videos to NeuTube, to predictably lukewarm reception. During this time, he appears to have undergone a 'troubled' phase, being arrested four times for trespassing/vandalism (graffiti art), with one instance of an assault charge, though this charge was dropped in court.

In investigating this incident, all I've been able to find is some indication that the incident was a case of self-defense and/or defense of another -- as Axel was a minor at the time, few details are on record, and no other perpetrator appears to have been convicted over the incident. This 'rebellious' phase seems to have been motivated by a distaste for the 'curated' nature of reality as lived by Concordia's citizens, and the artificial 'leadership' -- a common sentiment in young teens, not particularly worthy of note.

In 2096, they had their first 'big break' as the result of a collaboration with popular streamer "Kittynx", who he met at a convention, after which his subscriber count on Link.tv and NeuTube expanded dramatically, and marked the first appearance of their "GGreen" brand. Axel's channel hosts a blend of content, largely comprised of gaming streams/videos and short skating/freerunning clips, but also includes 'talk streams', 'meme videos', 'react videos', clips of day-to-day life, and various other formats. His online persona displays an energetic and straightforward personality, commonly referred to by fans as a 'himbo'/'thembo'. It's unclear from observation how much of this is true to Axel's offline self, though my subjective assessment would be that it likely isn't much of a fabrication, as the fundamentals of the persona match up fairly well with written reports by his teachers.

As well as streaming, Axel has recently begun a budding e-sports career with Team Vanquish, signed onto their team for competitive multiplayer VR shooter 'Heaven's Vanguard'. Online communities seem to judge his performance in tournaments positively thus far.

In conclusion: Axel appears for all intents and purposes to be an ordinary young person, albeit with an impressive career as a content creator and an equally unimpressive maturity for his age. As with all other candidates, there are no factors that indicate why they were selected by the System for this investigation, and they share no meaningful commonalities with the other candidates. Thus, I'm forced to conclude that the selection process was, as we feared, random. Entirely fucking random.

Why in gods name else would the System put one of the most significant inquiries in living memory in the hands of an immature, clout-chasing delinquent? You can't show me any probability math that would convince me it was a good idea.

I'm done with this. I need a drink after how much brain-rottingly incomprehensible garbage I just had to watch to write up this damn report. Signing off.
Axel is accepted! They will certainly be the spark that elevates The System to the next radical level 🛹😎
 
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